EDIT:
Ok, so I re-arranged, a the wee bit, the blocks of text that I’d written m’self from the most recent pages and sprinkled them throughout in hopes of it fleshing out the story at least a wee bit in the direction I’m hoping it’s steering. Like driving winding wet roads at dark, I’m never sure what’s going to happen next at this speed.
I’d love to hear thoughts on the text in the pages; always need an outside opinion.
I’ll probably be adding more text in some blank spaces along the way as well as perfecting placement and phrasing on every page.